Introducing a new superhero to the world

 A new superhero comes from Neptune........with superhero powers............name is Mutant.............delhi is ...........Earthquake ..............he found ..................lives are in danger ..................A seismologist inform....................hazardous on the earth..........................He is doing his best to save.................Earthquake is natural but..............................because of not taking attention...........................is in danger. Animals are running...............lives...........................Superhero .........................with super powers ...................shows his.........................control the actions..............................hold the earth in his hand...........................stop the movement of inner layer of the earth............................saved lives of all..........................after doing all the things like..........................again become invisible and went to his own planet Neptune.

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  1. Ritika atriJune 9, 2021 at 7:52 PM

    It's great,but things could be added.

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  2. Harsh Plot WritingJune 9, 2021 at 7:53 PM

    It is great. You have created suspense as well. The things are arranged in the appropriate manner, but it is super powers, not superhero powers, as per me.
    Otherwise it is good, although ending could be better.

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  3. Shivani SinghJune 9, 2021 at 8:00 PM

    It is not ended. It is half right now. And Harsh Superhero powers means that those powers which a superhero is having here, that's why I mentioned it. I will complete it by a good ending. Thank you Ritika and Harsh.

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  4. Harsh Plot WritingJune 10, 2021 at 7:46 PM

    Inciting Incident: it is good, although things should have written in past tesnse. So, I'd give 3/5.

    Rising action: The suspense you created was good. And it is nicely mentioned. That's why, I am giving you, 4/5.

    Climax: the way by which you cracked the suspense and then when the turning point came was nice but it could be done better.
    Ex. Hero's flying power Couldn't work in heat 🔥 then we tried another way
    So, I'd love to give 3.5out of 5.
    .
    Resolution: the ending was literally good. 4.5 out of 5.

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